Reviews
One of the best ever!
payback
blackmailing
Slavery and humiliation
Black master and Mistress
Obese master
and of course ponygirls and modification 5 out of 5 (Ruthy)
Author reply: Always gratifying to get a 5/5. Glad you enjoyed the story. Abel
excellent piece : the main Master is a vivid character knowing to play with the sluts both mentally and physically and the flavor of Black dominance is nice ; could be stronger in my humble opinion. 4 out of 5 (ohu)
Author reply: Glad you liked the main master. I try to avoid cardboard cut out characters. Abel
Very impressive scenes of training and submission. 4 out of 5 (Giles)
Author reply: Glad you enjoyed the training scenes. Will try to write more of the same ilk. Abel
His captured women give in too easily 2 out of 5 (Chicagossl)
Author reply: Perhaps they should struggle more! Abel
